SOME PEOPLE SAY THAT AT THE AGE OF 65 THEY SHOULD STILL CONTINUE TO WORK.
EXPLAIN BOTH THE SIDES AND GIVE YOUR OPINION.
Many countries have a stipulated age for retirement for every worker. However, some people assert the view and some concur with the same. The essay will deal with both the sides followed by the opinion.
On the one hand, there is a belief that people should superannuate on attaining the age of 65 years. It cannot be disputed that an older person has immense experience in the area of practice which will benefit the company and will be lost if a person is made to walk out after attaining a specific age. Further, the senior employees of the company tend to be more diligent towards work compared to the younger ones. For instance, in many companies the workforce is young and they lack the knowledge and ability to deal with a specific kind of problem and for a solution, they tend to seek an expert who is of an older age. Thus, the age of a person cannot be the benchmark for their performance. Some older employees tend to work better than the young employees and some young employees are worse than the old employees. As such, the chronological age is not the true indicator of performance and ability.
On the other hand, it is believed that the people should leave from the workplace on attaining a specific age because they cannot be expected to work throughout their life and snatch away the opportunities of other people who are worthy of having a job. The new generation may not have the experience to deal with the problems but with the addition of new generation, new ideas are brought to life to tackle many problems. For example, the society changes from time to time and many things undergo change as such new and modern thinking is needed to counter the problems. Therefore, the older generation cannot be expected to be the part of the organization forever.
In conclusion, in my opinion, the ability of a person should be the measure of the whether the person should continue with the work or not and the age factor should not be the criterion. There are many talented workers without a job and as such we should measure people from their talent.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1711.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 368.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64945652174 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5277976673 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.451086956522 0.561755894193 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 542.7 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.8511969421 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.9375 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.9375 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215349933227 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.075466880931 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0637849282127 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144949650022 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0446677436413 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.99 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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