Dear Mr. Clark,
I am writing to you to apologize for all the inconvenience I have caused. I have no words to express how embarrassed I am while writing to you. Allow me to elaborate.
As you know, I have a pet dog and I am staying alone in the big house. Further, I am working with a company in the Downtown Area and return back late. However, some people complained to me about sounds coming from my house. I would like to assure that nothing is wrong in my house. However, my dog tends to go crazy when I am not around.
Furthermore, I am aware that it is a calm neighborhood and people do not appreciate any unnecessary sound from anywhere. I feel so sorry from the bottom of my heart and assure you that it will never be repeated again.
In addition, I have decided to leave my dog at the new dog day care centre near the intersection from tomorrow onwards. I am aware that I cannot undo what has transpired, but I assure you it will never happen again.
I hope that you will give me a fresh start.
Yours sincerely,
Brad Jason
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 134, Rule ID: RETURN_BACK[1]
Message: Use simply 'return'.
Suggestion: return
...with a company in the Downtown Area and return back late. However, some people complained t...
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Line 7, column 203, Rule ID: REPEAT_AGAIN[1]
Message: Use simply 'repeated'.
Suggestion: repeated
...rt and assure you that it will never be repeated again. In addition, I have decided to lea...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, so, while, i feel, in addition, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 857.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 198.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.32828282828 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57031014379 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585858585859 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 277.2 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.1121161395 44.8134815571 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 61.2142857143 76.5299724578 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1428571429 16.8248392259 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.78571428571 4.34317383033 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191033005318 0.216113520407 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0662411949494 0.0766984524023 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0499920786714 0.0603063233224 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101696787681 0.12726935374 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0253735821028 0.0580467560999 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.0 8.37731958763 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.24 8.71597938144 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.72 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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