It has been found that a lot of offenders indulge in more crimes despite being convicted once. This is seriously a matter of tension to any government but none of the governments has been able to exquisitely tackle this issue. So, this essay talks about major causes of it and pursuasive solutions to curb it.
Little do we know that a feeling of retaliation or crime araises mostly because of inappropriate legal systems. Coupled with injustice and biasness, conspiracy undoubtedly provokes any wrongdoer to commit more crimes as he/she gets mentally tormented because of latter issues. To give an illustration, my uncle was intentionally charged of terrorism acts during civil war of Nepal and he, who was a typical teacher, had no option than slaining two cops and eventually joining Maoist Liberal Army(then terrorist group).
With this issue in mind, it is extremely necessary to wipe out this trend before it is inextricably late. It is very requisite for any country to have a proper judicial system, and wide range of punishments be it capital or other punishments. A legal authority must consider motivations and possible plots before indicting somone with a strangling capital or fixed punishment. Likewise, education plays a commendable role as a solution to the latter issue. Not only does it instill positive things in culprits' mind, but also perpetually deters them from executing dangerous crimes. Another key thing to remember is rehabilitation. It can also transform prisoners to be much better citizens after streches.
In conclusion, though the rate of crimes from the convicted prisoners are increasing, we can reduce it by a significant proportion. However, it is mandatory that a country has a transparent judicial system, proper education system and rehabilitation centres for wrongdoers.
- New household appliances have resulted in more free time for women and has enabled them to both work and run a home with dependent children.Do you think the disadvantages outweight the advantages? 84
- many offenders commit more crimes after serving the first punishment.why is this happening and what measures can be tackle this problem. 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 471, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ution to the latter issue. Not only does it instill positive things in culprits m...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, likewise, so, still, then, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1530.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29411764706 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0409890451 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.664359861592 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.691138181 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.0 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2666666667 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.26666666667 7.06120827912 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204218851416 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0570873110601 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0554493370794 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107879470832 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0695943722647 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.71 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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