Nowadays, the crime rate has increased significantly which had led to influx of criminal in the reformative homes and also in the state prisons. The same has led to an argument in which some assert that the criminal should be locked up whereas some hold a dissenting view and say the criminals should be made to serve the society without any pay. The essay will deal with both the sides followed by an opinion.
On the one hand, the criminals are considered to be inhumane people who pose danger to the society. Their acts speak for themselves and with the gravity of the offence that has been committed by them make them an element which has to be kept in isolation from the society. For instance, there are criminals who have committed offences which are of very serious in nature and as a result, they are kept in solitary confinement to warden off any possible issues in the jail premises itself. Thus, the criminals are dangerous elements of the society and are rightly kept away from the society to avoid any issue in the society.
On the other hand, some criminals who are convicted for petty offences should not be made to spend time and rather made to work for the society in their area of expertise. Moreover, in the modern society, there are many convictions for white collar crime which only affect a certain category of people and no life is endangered. These types of people should be allowed to work for the society to learn their lessons without being given any remuneration. For example, a stockbroker in New York was convicted by the Superior Court of New York and rather than being confined in the four walls were made to wear a leg tag to track all the time and was made to work for the government and received nothing in return. Therefore, the governments should use the petty offenders to serve a better purpose.
In conclusion, in my opinion, it can be said that it would be better if there is a unified system to make the offenders serve a better purpose by serving the society. The petty offenders should be made to serve the society who do not pose any risk and the high-risk offenders should be put in solitary confinement to establish a safe environment in the jail and also in the society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 329, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t in solitary confinement to establish a safe environment in the jail and also in...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, whereas, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 13.1623246493 198% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1830.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 398.0 315.596192385 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59798994975 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46653527281 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49807380152 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.462311557789 0.561755894193 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 599.4 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.4766712017 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.714285714 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.4285714286 20.7667163134 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2857142857 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262273763854 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0950119308433 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0574757964545 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157676646243 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0460255517098 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.7 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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