Neighbour are the immediate relatives as nowadays to population explotion in urban area. Many people do not interect their neighbours, as a result the boding among the members of society has been reduced. So before provide a solution this essay elaborate its various reason.
To begin with, the peoples are less immediate with neighbours because they are very busy in their life. Nowadays all people have their jobs and bussiness so they have less time to spend their neighbours and relatives. Peoples have different working shifts. For instance, some peoples are work in night shifts and some others people work in day. Secondly, the peoples are less go outside. When they have free time so they are busy on their social circle friends, like facebook, youtube etc.
There is almost certainly no one solution to this problem given the complexity of its causes. However, one option is the people are should be organized the monthly meetings with their neighbours and discussed about clean and green their society. Secondly, they should be make a trip together and spend time with each others. They must allow the childrens to play with their neighbours childrens.
In conclusion, there are variety of different factors that have lead to make this problem worse while at may not be possible to find a complete solution of this. The neighbours are important of our life. They are strong relation in our whole life. So peoples must try to contact with neighbours and make a good relations.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “So before” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...he members of society has been reduced. So before provide a solution this essay elaborate...
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Message: Did you mean 'made'?
Suggestion: made
...their society. Secondly, they should be make a trip together and spend time with eac...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'relation'?
Suggestion: relation
...contact with neighbours and make a good relations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, second, secondly, so, while, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1246.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 249.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00401606426 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44663038193 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.550200803213 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 381.6 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.0453981401 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.2941176471 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6470588235 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142275367442 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0478977222177 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0411198016063 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0919556878432 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0220889075745 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.0946893788 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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