It is true that nowadays students are concentrating on academic study in universities. While I agree that academic study is the main responsibility for university student, I believe that it is also important for young student to take part into extra-curricular activities.
On the one hand, it would help to develop the profession skills for student to participate activities, such as sporting clubs and volunteering activities. These activities could build skills that class study would not always foster. For example, a leadership-oriented club would develop students’ leadership skills and project management skills while a speech club would help student to practice the public speech skills. In a word, these activities would build students ability of multi-tasks and teamwork spirits which would be the key skills needed in the later life.
On the other hand, it would prepare student better employability for the future work. Activities such as internship and part-time work would help students to put knowledge into practise and gain the experience in the chosen fields. Furthermore, In most cases, an internship during terms would always lead to an official offer after graduate, which means that students would build their network during internship and get the opportunity to achieve a work offer that most students aim for.
In conclusion, academic study is the main task for university students, and I believe students should involved into some social activities in order to improve their skills for the future work and life.
- Some people believe the government should spend money on building train and subway lines to reduce traffic congestion. Others think that building more and wider roads is the better way to reduce traffic congestion. Discuss both views and give your opinion 78
- Some people believe the government should spend money on building train and subway lines to reduce traffic congestion. Others think that building more and wider roads is the better way to reduce traffic congestion. Discuss both views and give your opinion 79
- Some people prefer to live in a house, while others feel that there are more prons to living in an apartment. Are there more advantages than disadvantages of living in a house compared with living in an apartment? 11
- Some people believe the government should spend money on building train and subway lines to reduce traffic congestion. Others think that building more and wider roads is the better way to reduce traffic congestion. Discuss both views and give your opinion 78
- The movement of people from agricultural areas to cities can cause serious problems in both places What are the serious problems and what measures can be take to solve the problems 81
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, so, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, in most cases, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1312.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 241.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44398340249 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03309000732 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.514522821577 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 392.4 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.0062723696 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.2 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5 7.06120827912 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0272585424207 0.244688304435 11% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0120797138739 0.084324248473 14% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0152316574591 0.0667982634062 23% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0189621469159 0.151304729494 13% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0129535815845 0.056905535591 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.57 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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