In many countries, the amount of crime is increasing. What do you think are the main cause of crime? How can we deal with those cause?
Government has plenty of rule to prevents crime although Crime rate has been increasing over the few decades due to several reasons are increased crime rate. This essay is going to elaborate reasons along with solutions and at the last with tenable conclusion.
First reasons, country population, owing to this common reason per head earning is very less and cost of living is high so one head cannot effort cost and one have to try some shortcut way to earn money which motivate to do crime. Second reason, unemployment rate is high as compare to past so unemployment person does not have any activity to do for earning money owing to this their mind are ready to adopt any wrong way to earn money. Third reason, some people have tendency to commit crime often for fun. Nowadays we have observed in group of teenage and they can feel good to commit crime and they are not aware about the rules. Single parenting child can easily motivate to conduct any crime because they have not taken more attention from their guardian.
On the solution side, those who have huge population in their country need to control population. Another solution, some small company need to establish to avoid unemployment so people can get job or business and they can be active and busy whole day which lead to motivate earn money from right way. Government should take care of those people who are addicted to do crime often time meanwhile school has to learn good thing to child because children can easily grape things in their childhood. Good culture is required by society because society is most vital part to being human.
In conclusion, from what has been discussed above are momentous problems for the increase rate of crime and we can prevent it by some solution however, one individual have to take interest for prevent crime.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 209, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ave to take interest for prevent crime.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, second, so, third, while, as to, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1513.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80317460317 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30916977595 2.80592935109 82% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.4537702651 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.083333333 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.25 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.16666666667 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177906215283 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0712457384468 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0453318803169 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122582660514 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0241980660835 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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