in any field—business, politics, education, government—those in power should be required to step down after five years.

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in any field—business, politics, education, government—those in power should be required to step down after five years.

The powerful positions in our society are so demanding.Not to say that, even though a person has worked all his life to be in this powerful position, the people cannot accept him for more than a particular span of time.Although change is vital, change in power in business can often lead to fiasco.Let us discuss about the various places where change is vital, and places where it is not.

During the reigns of a particular leader, that particular organization has become a epitome in its stream.Nevertheless to sustain that legacy, the leader has to step down.Let us consider real madrid football club as source of education to football players.Their head master was zinedine zidane. One can never doubt the three time champions league winner’s feats.But in his fourth year ,he himself felt that in order for his students to sustain the legacy they needed a change, and therefore he stepped down.The team still now has been considered as the greatest club in history of football.Hence change proved to be useful is this case.

Secondly, everyone deserves a chance.Two people who had the same passion for power, work separately all their life to achieve it.
Hence we cannot just give chance for one and succumb the other.
If governments don’t choose a president once in five years, then leaders tend be in an amok state.Let us consider a leader who came to power and was in fact successful .But still people want more and they choose his antagonist as the president the next tenure.Hence we can get to know that change is vital, as people never settle for what they have.

On the contrary ,certain business need their backbone to be present as their leader for perennial success.An Example for such a case is Microsoft.When Bill gates stepped down as their leader the company came down the ladders in terms of ranking in affluence.The company didn’t crumble,But in similar contention, the company also couldn’t sustain.

In some cases, there were countries which remained successful even without a change in their leadership.Russia is a very good example.They are country where the president gets in stay in power for a long time.But still they are successful.However they aren’t as successful as the united states where change in leadership proves to be a reason for their success.

Henceforth change is essential.In order to grow one needs to evolve and to evolve power must not be allowed to remain in hands of the same person for a time span of more than 5 years.
Hence every government , political party or educational institutions must have a cardinal outlook on looking to evolve and henceforth providing chances to all the deserved and therefore remain sanguine.

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also, but, hence, however, if, look, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, still, then, therefore, as to, in fact, in some cases, on the contrary

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 33.0505617978 112% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 58.6224719101 96% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2270.0 2235.4752809 102% => OK
No of words: 448.0 442.535393258 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06696428571 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60065326758 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97539275372 2.79657885939 106% => OK
Unique words: 244.0 215.323595506 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544642857143 0.4932671777 110% => OK
syllable_count: 707.4 704.065955056 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.77640449438 338% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.2370786517 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 44.0 23.0359550562 191% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 109.059662571 60.3974514979 181% => OK
Chars per sentence: 227.0 118.986275619 191% => OK
Words per sentence: 44.8 23.4991977007 191% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.3 5.21951772744 274% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 9.0 4.97078651685 181% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 37.0 7.80617977528 474% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118769331598 0.243740707755 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0490726358639 0.0831039109588 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0262201820144 0.0758088955206 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0510731849581 0.150359130593 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0280744405464 0.0667264976115 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.8 14.1392134831 175% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 26.82 48.8420337079 55% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.5 12.1743820225 168% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.01 12.1639044944 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.38706741573 112% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 100.480337079 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 11.8971910112 240% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 19.6 11.2143820225 175% => OK
text_standard: 29.0 11.7820224719 246% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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