Your neighbors have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house flat.
Write a letter to your neighbors. In your letter
• explain the reasons for the noise
• apologize
• describe what action you will take
Dear Mr. Hoang,
My name is Truong Nguyen. Lately, I have been informed by the building’s administrator that the noise comes from my apartment is bothering you and other families in the complex. Therefore, I am writing this letter to apologize for this matter.
The noise that you are hearing from my apartment is actually coming from the windows doors. I noticed this annoying noise 5 months ago, however, I have not had the time to fix the problem since I am usually away from home and forget to lock the windows. Thus, I suppose that they were making a lot of uncomfortable noises. For that reason, I am sincerely sorry for my mistakes and I hope you would understand my explanation.
I am currently on my business trip for 2 weeks. However, I promise to have the noise disappeared as soon as I return. In the meantime, if you have any suggestion please let me know and I will try my best to actions remotely.
I am looking forward to receiving a call from you.
Yours faithfully,
Truong Nguyen
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 20, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
... for this matter. The noise that you are hearing from my apartment is actually coming fr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, however, if, look, so, therefore, thus, i suppose
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 840.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 180.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66666666667 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78950856329 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.622222222222 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 260.1 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.3928624058 44.8134815571 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.0 76.5299724578 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 16.8248392259 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.91666666667 4.34317383033 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247121658662 0.216113520407 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0846905602617 0.0766984524023 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0507206884484 0.0603063233224 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128949729626 0.12726935374 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0223222548003 0.0580467560999 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 8.37731958763 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.21 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.