Write a letter to a friend to inform him/her about a job opening in your company. Describe the job;
1) write about the job.
2) How is it suitable for your friend?
3) How to apply for the job.
Dear Igor,
I hope the letter reaches you in the best of health. I am aware that you have been looking for a job after graduating from the law school. I have exciting news for you. Allow me to elaborate.
As you know, I am working with a government company for almost 4 years now with the Human Resource Division. The company has started a new programme to recruit internally and as such, I am writing to you to describe the job suitable for you. The company has around 50 job profiles listed for recruitment this time. There are 10 vacancies in the Law department. I think you would be the best fit to apply for Law Associate. The work would be limited to 40 hours a work and handsome remuneration. You would be required to coordinate with empanelled lawyers and update the case status within the company registry.
Further, I feel that the job would be the best fit for a person like you, my friend. You are looking for job security and pension benefits along with other ancillary benefits. I can assure you that it will be best for you to take up the job. Moreover, the chance of getting hired is high as it will be internal recruitment on a referral basis.
Do not think much about the job now and rather apply for it. You need to visit the website and create an account in the job bank section and apply. There will be a prompt about referring employee mention my name and employment code “e2666” and submit it.
I look forward to working with you in the same company. I wish you all the best and will be praying that your efforts are fructified.
Best wishes,
Brad Jason
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Igor, I hope the letter reaches you in the bes...
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Line 3, column 140, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...b after graduating from the law school. I have exciting news for you. Allow me to...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, moreover, so, i feel, i think, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.48453608247 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1314.0 937.175257732 140% => OK
No of words: 293.0 206.0 142% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.48464163823 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 3.78020617076 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51824406923 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 127.690721649 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539249146758 0.622605031667 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 402.3 290.88556701 138% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.13402061856 153% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 12.6804123711 166% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.4854589628 44.8134815571 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.5714285714 76.5299724578 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.9523809524 16.8248392259 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.33333333333 4.34317383033 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.94845360825 228% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246793007103 0.216113520407 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0802994513425 0.0766984524023 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0802706913526 0.0603063233224 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144476627544 0.12726935374 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0536965100926 0.0580467560999 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.6 8.37731958763 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.11 8.71597938144 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 41.2886597938 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.