The graph below shows the fertility rate of woman in different gulf countries from 1990 to 2000

Essay topics:

The graph below shows the fertility rate of woman in different gulf countries from 1990 to 2000

Bar graph gives the details about fertility rate of women in different six countries from the year of 1992 to 2000.

overall, The highest children birth rate per thousand by women was in oman and Arabia. Other countries had less rate.

In Bahrain and Kuwait fertility rate was equal in 1990 but it slightly changed in 2000. Bahrain had less rate than Kuwain in 2000.

on the other hand, Qatar and UAE had also same rate in 1990 that was little more than 4 thousand. But in 2000 there are highly decreased in UAE and slightly decreases in Qutar.

Finally Oman and Arabia was the country where the children birth rate was higher than other four countries in both year.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, so, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 33.7804878049 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 559.0 965.302439024 58% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 120.0 196.424390244 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65833333333 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.30975091965 3.73543355544 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.06543982402 2.65546596893 78% => OK
Unique words: 70.0 106.607317073 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 159.3 283.868780488 56% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.8305108069 43.030603864 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.875 112.824112599 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 22.9334400587 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.625 5.23603664747 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298811743966 0.215688989381 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.14343070173 0.103423049105 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.097208313051 0.0843802449381 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180311193895 0.15604864568 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0998311350412 0.0819641961636 122% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 13.2329268293 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 61.2550243902 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 10.3012195122 54% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.16 11.4140731707 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 40.7170731707 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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