Q)Some people believe that school children should not be given homework by their teachers,whereas other argue that homework plays an important role in education of their children.Discuss both views with your opinion.
A)It is quite common that children will b given homework at school.People's opinions differ as to whether or not teachers should set homework for their pupils.In this essay i will discuss both the views with my own perception.
People who support the former view have sundry reasons to put.Firstly,children will be tired at the end of school session and giving them assignments to do will overburden them and may cause them restless.Secondly,homework will make the juveniles to spend ample time which otherwise could be better spent on some extracurricular and physical activities to stay children fit and fiddle.Thirdly,playing is as important as studying.Finally,juveniles should be given the space and time to discover,develop and practice their natural talent and interest.
However,inspite of all above potential reasons,few masses ponder that setting homework for the pupils will inculcate the sense of responsibility in them.They will try to write essay,solve mathematical questions individually without any assistance,which will ultimately improve the cognitive abilities of the young ones.Moreover,setting homework will indulge the children in academic activities rather than to getting involve in some useless and evil activities.
To conclude,i think that both views have their own significance.Home assignments may overburden the children,however,I still believe that indulging them in assignments at home will make them more confident,responsible and dedicated towards their academics.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, third, thirdly, whereas, as to, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1572.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.97718631179 5.12529762239 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.13855926639 2.80592935109 147% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.61216730038 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 20.2975951904 182% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 176.257696315 49.4020404114 357% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 224.571428571 106.682146367 211% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 37.5714285714 20.7667163134 181% => OK
Discourse Markers: 17.2857142857 7.06120827912 245% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 27.0 5.01903807615 538% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.486220799075 0.244688304435 199% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.246773935606 0.084324248473 293% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.305617756172 0.0667982634062 458% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.246773935606 0.151304729494 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.305617756172 0.056905535591 537% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.5 13.0946893788 195% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 17.0 50.2224549098 34% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.1 11.3001002004 178% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 18.0 12.4159519038 145% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.85 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.8 10.1190380762 166% => OK
text_standard: 26.0 10.7795591182 241% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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