The use of mobile phone is as antisocial as smoking. Smoking is banned in certain places so mobile phone should be banned like smoking. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some individuals believe that mobile phone should be banned like smoking in certain place because it anti-social like smoking. In my opinion, I believe that mobile phone needs to keep under control however it should not be banned like smoking.
First of all, it is clear that mobile phones brings some problems and it should be controlled in some case. First, mobile phone should be controlled in some places. In fact, 100% the gas station prohibit the mobile phones because phone wave can cause detonating combustion. Besides, people must turn off phone power when they on airplane. The library also has regulations about limit phone noisy. Second, mobile phones divide people’s relationship. This because people are paying too much attention social network such as face book or instagram. They use almost their time to using mobile phones instead spend time for each other, they talking on messenger more than talking face to face.
However, I believe that mobile phone has many advantages and it should not be banned in public places for some reasons. The first reason is mobile phones is very necessary for contact.
Though mobile phones people can talking and seeing each other any time, no matter how they far away. Besides, mobile phone is very useful for emergency situations. For example, when people see a robbery they can call immediately for police to notice. Moreover, people can use mobile phone for work in public places because it convenienct. They can check email on the train, read a newspaper on the car and texting for the work when they watting for lunch in a restaurant. They also use the map on the phone when they astray or travelling to different places. Hence, mobile phones should be banned like smoking because it is not as bad as smoking and not directly effects people’s health.
In conclusion, mobile phones needs to use right way but it should not be banned in public places.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 52, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, hence, however, if, moreover, second, so, for example, in conclusion, in fact, such as, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1605.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96904024768 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41269649789 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.49226006192 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 503.1 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.4679358526 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 80.25 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.15 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.1 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 3.4128256513 322% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.421258254866 0.244688304435 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.171000154205 0.084324248473 203% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.125396239327 0.0667982634062 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.315045012348 0.151304729494 208% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0982308192744 0.056905535591 173% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.25 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.07 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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