Some people work for the same organization all their working life. Others think that it is better to work for different organizations. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Working in the same organization whole the professional career is a dilemma faced by many people, therefore there is debate whether to stay in a company for a lifetime or not. While many stick to one company, others look for new challenges in their professional life. In my perspective, one must take on new challenges and learn new skills instead of being in one place with the least chance for improvement or new things to happen.
People who stay in the organization will have the advantages such as permanent insurance, promotion, lower risks caused by cutting off labor force and so on. The working environment is comfortable and almost everyone is familiar with you. In addition, considering pension and retirement, your job security is guaranteed and the future is more promising than working in different places.
However, one of the drawbacks of staying with the same job is boredom and getting slightly fatigued. Moving from one organization to another means new challenges, learning new things and meeting new individuals. Once I changed my job, I was inundated with worries like not being able to show myself as I really am or how much the novelty of new work would be. But I could successfully apply things I already knew and cope with the new situation. I met new colleagues and made good friendships with them. So that I had better confidence and more hopeful about what future has put aside for me.
As I have discussed, there are benefits to working for one organization, although many decide to move and gather new experiences. I feel it’s necessary to undergo new situations and learn new things if we are looking for progressive life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 183, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun stick seems to be countable; consider using: 'many sticks'.
Suggestion: many sticks
... a company for a lifetime or not. While many stick to one company, others look for new cha...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, really, so, therefore, while, i feel, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1383.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90425531915 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86496075027 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606382978723 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.8252928259 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.7857142857 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1428571429 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.85714285714 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197662402007 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.07396315373 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0555655762887 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135022408517 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0368883911369 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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