The figure reveals IT and Service industries' share in the UK's GDP from 1992 and 8 years later. It is clearly seen that the IT industry provides higher percentage of GDP compared to the other component. Also, an increase for both industries was seen in the given data.
The IT industry started with above 6% share in the UK's economy in 1992 and this grew up to more than 8% after 2 years but dropped below 8% in 1996. In 1998, it rocketed up to 12%, a double fold of its value during the first year and rose up to 15% at the end of the period.
On the otherhand, the service industry had less than 2% of the IT's starting point but it gradually increased over the years. In 1994, it had a little over 6% and an added 1% was seen after 2 years. By the last year it doubled its value with a little over 8% but it was far lesser compared to the other component.
- The table shows the Proportions of Pupils Attending Four Secondary School Types between 2000 and 2009. 78
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- Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both these views and give y 67
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 5.60731707317 250% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 700.0 965.302439024 73% => OK
No of words: 169.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.14201183432 4.92477711251 84% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.188117357 2.65546596893 82% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 106.607317073 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538461538462 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 203.4 283.868780488 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.9009531678 43.030603864 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.5 112.824112599 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.125 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 5.23603664747 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.10296966207 0.215688989381 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0534049564183 0.103423049105 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0899857068029 0.0843802449381 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0757626458 0.15604864568 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0697244341668 0.0819641961636 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 13.2329268293 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 84.0 61.2550243902 137% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.73 11.4140731707 59% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.11 8.06136585366 88% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 40.7170731707 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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