Many of the problems young people now experience, like juveniled delinquences, arise from fact that many married women worked and are not at home to look after their children. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

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Many of the problems young people now experience, like juveniled delinquences, arise from fact that many married women worked and are not at home to look after their children. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

In this era of technology, various hassles are faced by youngsters such as crime, terrorism and juveniled delinquency. Some proportion of folk blame that these happenings take place only in the absence of parents as nowadays married women are working instead of child-rearing. Here, i am personally inclined the favour of this statement.

There are manifold points to endorse my views. First and foremost, it is pondered that parents are the first mentor of their children to install moral ethics that is not possible in the absence of parents and lead their children to disastrous result. Thus, they then become quarrelsome , indolent and so on. Moreover,television violence is on the surge that shows vulgar movies, songs, serials and so on watched by adolescent in blank of their mothers which is no longer safe for vulnerable children. Hence, they attract them to sexual harrasments.

Furthermore, one of the factor behind these delinquences is internet, mobile phones, laptop, computers, give birth to cyber crime as well as these show bulgary sites, mms, pictures and many more result, bad habits in children. Moreover, the gigantic problem of rape cases mostly takes place without the presence of mothers. Hence, they spoil their career in prison.

In addition, absence of parents is one of the factor behind taking drugs and perform illegal activities. Thence, they harm their health and future too.What is more not only loneliness but also depression and pressure of studies are stimulating factors toward illegal activities. As a result, it is biggest worrying concern for parents , children and society too.

All in all, as per my above discussion it is evident that not only parents but society and government also take remedial measures to solve this enormous problem.It is well said that union is strength.

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Sentence: In this era of technology, various hassles are faced by youngsters such as crime, terrorism and juveniled delinquency.
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Sentence: Hence, they attract them to sexual harrasments.
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Sentence: Furthermore, one of the factor behind these delinquences is internet, mobile phones, laptop, computers, give birth to cyber crime as well as these show bulgary sites, mms, pictures and many more result, bad habits in children.
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A little bit out of topic. You need to argue why the reason is 'many married women worked and are not at home to look after their children'.

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