You recently received a letter from your friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job
write a letter to this friend. in your letter
- say why he/she would not enjoy going to college
- explain why getting a job is a good idea for him/her
- suggest types of job that would be suitable for him/her
Dear Mathew,
Thank you, for writing a letter to me, it has been ages since we have been in touch. Please! give regards to your family. I hope they are doing well. These days I need to do overtime in order to deal with the work- burden. That is the reason why, lately I have not much time for socializing.
In your, letter you have intentioned, that you don't want to go to college, instead like to join some work. Why wouldn't you like going to college? College life comes only once, you certainly going to miss it if you decide to not to continue studies. However, if you have decided your priority then I can precisely recommend some jobs in your vicinity.
Starting to earn money is one of the prominent advantages of doing a job. You will become self-dependent and also able to support your family financially. As you have completed your intermediate schoolings in commerce stream there are abundant opportunities in your town to start a career as an assistant accountant. Moreover, the fishing industry nearby has copious requirements for individuals like you. You can join in any fish export company as a trainee. This way it will surely open the new horizon for your bright future ahead.
If you require any more aid from my side, do remember that I am just a call away and I wish all the best in all your future expeditions.
Best wishes
John.
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- Schools are spending more time teaching traditional subjects such as history Some people think they should rather spend more time in teaching skills that can help students find a job to what extent do you agree or disagree 100
- It is generally discussed among the public that the extreme sports such as skydiving and rock-climbing should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree.give reasons for your explanations and use any relevant examples from your own life. 78
- In many countries, people are not taking care of their elderly relatives but seeking the help of professionals to look after them. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?Describe your views and give examples from your own life. 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 94, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Give
...es since we have been in touch. Please! give regards to your family. I hope they are...
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Line 5, column 48, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
..., letter you have intentioned, that you dont want to go to college, instead like to ...
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Line 5, column 112, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wouldn't
...ge, instead like to join some work. Why wouldnt you like going to college? College life...
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Line 9, column 138, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...he best in all your future expeditions. Best wishes John.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, so, then, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1125.0 937.175257732 120% => OK
No of words: 243.0 206.0 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62962962963 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57750525445 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 127.690721649 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.646090534979 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 357.3 290.88556701 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.7915666582 44.8134815571 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.1764705882 76.5299724578 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2941176471 16.8248392259 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.52941176471 4.34317383033 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 7.41237113402 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280790964433 0.216113520407 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0850258875607 0.0766984524023 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0675794031515 0.0603063233224 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157890081427 0.12726935374 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0860666309907 0.0580467560999 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 8.37731958763 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.98 8.71597938144 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.