TPO-03 - Independent Writing Task
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
There is no shortage of debate whether it is better to keep having an old friend than making new set of friend. Having friends can keep a individual be grounded, happy and opt to have someone that they can depend on in times of difficulties in life. In my opinion, it is more advantageous to have someone in your life that you know very well and trust. I feel this way fro two main reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, keeping old friends are more beneficial, due to, they know you much better. Old friends usually are tested through hardships in life, they are the people who are always at your side no matter what happened. My own experience is a compelling example of this. I Have a old friend in my childhood, which is truly trust with my life. I know for a fact, that when I need him the most he would be for in an instance. We are on our yearly trip at the beach that time, I was swimming afar and suddenly i experienced muscle cramps I could not further swim, due to stiffening of my calf muscle, but, my friend helped me survived he reached my hand and dragged me to the shore. For this reason, I strongly believed that old friend will always have your back no matter what circumstances you are facing.
Secondly, Old friends have certain bond or connection that cannot be changed, even if new friends would come, there is a deep understanding and love with each other. Even if distance and time with separate you from each other, the connection will be the same. For instance, My best friend migrated to the states last year, but, our connection with each other still flourished even if we are miles away. Our bond stayed strong despite the difference in time zones, thus, it kept our friendship on the highest level. We became more close with each other, shared our deepest secrets together and definitely trust each other. Accordingly, I think that this kind of friendship helped me to treat other people more better.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that it is more advantageous to have an old friend rather than making new friends. This is because old friends are better trusted and will be always be there for you in times of need.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 137, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... set of friend. Having friends can keep a individual be grounded, happy and opt t...
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Line 1, column 370, Rule ID: FOR_FRO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'for'?
Suggestion: for
...ow very well and trust. I feel this way fro two main reasons, which I will explore ...
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Line 3, column 281, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...is a compelling example of this. I Have a old friend in my childhood, which is tr...
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Line 3, column 510, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... time, I was swimming afar and suddenly i experienced muscle cramps I could not f...
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Line 5, column 705, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'better' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: better
...endship helped me to treat other people more better. In conclusion, I strongly believe t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, still, thus, well, for instance, i feel, i think, in conclusion, kind of, you know, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 61.0 43.0788530466 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1792.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 397.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.51385390428 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46372701284 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43667588372 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.498740554156 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 540.0 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 20.0 9.59856630824 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.4044632575 48.9658058833 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.3157894737 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8947368421 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.52631578947 5.45110844103 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2104775443 0.236089414692 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0770736432532 0.076458572812 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.060797886594 0.0737576698707 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14951127737 0.150856017488 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0394107011153 0.0645574589148 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.88 10.9000537634 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.21 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 86.8835125448 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.