Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to raise my concern about the disturbance being caused by an on-going repair in my locality.
My name is Jonathon and I reside on the Mitchell road. I moved here recently, attracted by the location. However, the local community hall near my home is currently undergoing some reconstruction. As a part of it, the workers are drilling the old concrete building, which is creating a lot of noise pollution. Most of the work is being carried out during evenings, which is when I return from my office. Sometimes, the work continues until midnight and we find it tough to sleep peacefully.
So, kindly try to change the schedule of this work to a different time period. I think 8 AM to 5 PM better suits the situation, as most of us in this area attend office during those hours. Additionally, children too would find it easy to concentrate on their studies in a silent environment. I hope you will look in to this matter seriously.
I look forward to hearing back from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Jonathon
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 87, Rule ID: ON-GOING[1]
Message: Did you mean 'ongoing'?
Suggestion: ongoing
...bout the disturbance being caused by an on-going repair in my locality. My name is J...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, so, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 874.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 184.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81819550385 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.673913043478 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 262.8 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.1198788276 44.8134815571 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.2307692308 76.5299724578 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1538461538 16.8248392259 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.30769230769 4.34317383033 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.105144490267 0.216113520407 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0331114952938 0.0766984524023 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0412093959294 0.0603063233224 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0624418173589 0.12726935374 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0420451069203 0.0580467560999 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 8.37731958763 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.68 8.71597938144 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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