Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Young people enjoy life more than older people do. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

I agree with the belief that young people enjoy life more than older people do. There are a few reasons I have for stating this.

First of all, kids and teenagers have less experience than adults, so they have a lot to learn and to be curious about, which makes life more interesting. While people with experience tend to be more judgmental and skeptical about things. Overall, old people find it complicated to adapt to life changes because they had live certain way through all of their lives. Young people find it easier to act differently. An example of this is technology: young ones love the internet, being on their smart-phones and playing video games, whereas adults complain about the usage of this gadgets.

The second reason why children have more fun, is they enjoy good health in general. Boys and girls have a lot of energy to waste and can do many things, while elders struggle to keep up with life when health issues become common and harder to handle. When I was younger, I used to spend around 12 hours per week practicing all sorts of sports, but now I can barely maintain my shape by going to yoga lessons three times a week. Also, I have many back problems to deal with.

Finally, since food, shelter and education is provided by their parents, kids have nothing to worry about regarding money! In the adult world, people have to be responsible for credits, mortgages, bank accounts and everything related to their financial future and the one of the young ones. When our parents were working most of the time, we were just adoring existence and playing with toys.

In conclusion, it is much better to be a kid or a teenager in order to appreciate what life has to give, before the dark hour of adulthood comes.

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Average: 7.6 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, regarding, second, so, whereas, while, as to, in conclusion, in general, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 43.0788530466 53% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1437.0 1977.66487455 73% => OK
No of words: 309.0 407.700716846 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65048543689 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35123012781 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.631067961165 0.524837075471 120% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 618.680645161 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.2486609449 48.9658058833 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.642857143 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0714285714 20.6045352989 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.28571428571 5.45110844103 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256252310625 0.236089414692 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101243481362 0.076458572812 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.140113231997 0.0737576698707 190% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166558673813 0.150856017488 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.166270845867 0.0645574589148 258% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 11.7677419355 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 58.1214874552 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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