Write a letter to complain about a situation in which some adolescents let their dogs run wildly causing dangerous.
Respected Sir,
I hope this letter will find you in best of health. My name is Jim and I am a resident of hide park flats. I want to draw your attention to a major issue that we are facing now-a-days. I along with my family, usually go out to the nearby park for a daily walk in evening. I must appreciate the efforts your team has made to maintain the park to the full of its beauty. There are many other people around who are either walking or doing some exercise. The rising trend of keeping a pet in society is good but it has been observed that few adolescents bring their dogs for a walk in the same park.
We have no concerns if this is the only issue, but major issue that we are facing is they are found to be careless in holding the string of their pets. They usually let their dogs go free while talking to each other, and it becomes a risk for public as these dogs ran into other people and often bite them. In park there are kids also who use to play there but due to the fear of getting bitten by dog, they started avoiding coming to the parks.
It is humbly requested to take preventive measures so that people can use park facility with peace and calmness as before.
Yours sincerely,
Jim
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 273, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...earby park for a daily walk in evening. I must appreciate the efforts your team h...
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Line 3, column 339, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...e them. In park there are kids also who use to play there but due to the fear of ge...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.48453608247 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 977.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 234.0 206.0 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.17521367521 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.09689754792 2.54303337028 82% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 127.690721649 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611111111111 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 312.3 290.88556701 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.7453985132 44.8134815571 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.4166666667 76.5299724578 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 16.8248392259 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 4.34317383033 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.100772264118 0.216113520407 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0303539400134 0.0766984524023 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0384822300245 0.0603063233224 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0569046928775 0.12726935374 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0416819132734 0.0580467560999 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 8.37731958763 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 70.7449484536 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.96 8.71597938144 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.74 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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