Hi Sara,
Sorry it's taken me so long to write to you but at last I put pen to paper to explain why I have not returned that NSE textbook I borrowed from you.
To be honest I have been feeling so guilty that I delayed writing to you. I have to own up that I damaged the book accidentally. I am so very sorry. I know how important that book is to you as it was passed down from your father.
What happened is that I had been reading up on the chapter about share price determination when I knocked over my cup of coffee which splashed all over the book. Most of the stain is on the pages that were open at that time.
I’ve sent the book away to be repaired. I didn’t realize that was even possible until I researched it. Anyway, it should be as good as new when I get it back next week and then I’ll send it on to you.
Again, I’m so sorry for the delay in telling you. I hope you can forgive me.
Best wishes,
Ryan
- Some people get into debts by buying things they don’t need and can’t afford. What are the reasons for this behaviour? What action can be taken to prevent people from having this problem? 84
- One of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expectancy is increasing.Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages ? 56
- You have recently enrolled in a part-time course in a university. Write a letter to the dean about something you are not pleased with.> describe your course> express your feelings about the course> give suggestions regarding what the universit 78
- Many people believe that social networking sites (such as Facebook) have had a huge negative impact on both individuals and society. To what extent do you agree? 61
- Crime is a big problem in the world; many believe that nothing can be done to prevent it. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give your opinion. 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: haven't
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, but, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 3.03092783505 363% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 767.0 937.175257732 82% => OK
No of words: 185.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.14594594595 4.54256449028 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26965242558 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.643243243243 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 236.7 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.4548837181 44.8134815571 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 59.0 76.5299724578 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2307692308 16.8248392259 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.61538461538 4.34317383033 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238335180608 0.216113520407 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0730001998313 0.0766984524023 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0711284706285 0.0603063233224 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122729727697 0.12726935374 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0800434656979 0.0580467560999 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.2 8.37731958763 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.2 8.71597938144 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.06 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.