The following graph and pie chart shows the sales of a company in the first and the second quadrent of the year.
The given horizontal and pie chart reveals the information about the sales of the first six months of the year: January, February, March, April, May and June by the company. The data is celebrated in the percentum which is cleary and coherently representation of the data.
It can be seen that, in the first quarter of the year, the sale of other products was 20% . Moreover, the sale of toys were 5%. Furthermore, the sale of food and clothes had been 25% in the first quadrent. At the last, the sales of computers nad electrical products were 10% and 15% respectively.
On the other side, in the second quadrent of the pie chart, the sale of other products was 25%. Apart from that, the sale of electrical products were 5%. Moreover, sale of both computers and clothes had been 10%. Furthermore, the money spend on food and toys was 20% and 30% respectively.
Overall, it is evident that, the sale of toys were increased in first and second quadrent where as there was a drop in the sale of electrical productsin both quadrents.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 90, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...year, the sale of other products was 20% . Moreover, the sale of toys were 5%. Fur...
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Line 7, column 91, Rule ID: WHERE_AS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'whereas'?
Suggestion: whereas
... increased in first and second quadrent where as there was a drop in the sale of electri...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, may, moreover, second, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 856.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 183.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67759562842 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66071326623 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 88.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.48087431694 0.547539520022 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 251.1 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 10.0 4.33902439024 230% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.0418049319 43.030603864 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.8181818182 112.824112599 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6363636364 22.9334400587 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.81818181818 5.23603664747 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292380754444 0.215688989381 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115315845421 0.103423049105 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0878652285896 0.0843802449381 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192777728921 0.15604864568 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0155690484378 0.0819641961636 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 13.2329268293 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 11.4140731707 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.93 8.06136585366 86% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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