The table below gives data on the hour of leisure time per year for people in Someland.
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information in the table below.
The table illustrates, the information regarding six kind of time pass activities of people in Someland. Units are measured in hour.
Overall, overwhelming majority of people spend their extra hours for watching TV or vedio's in all age groups with more than 400 hours. Teens and age 20s spend most of their time for given activities over the period.
Regarding Individual exercise all people arrange time over 150 hour except the age of adults they have 50 to 75 each. Similarly, up to adulthood they found time for group exercise and sports which is absent in older than 60 year old.Moreover,
people who watches cinema during free time is comparatively lower in all age group instead, teens was highest with 100 hour.
After the age of 30 people reduce the time for socializing to four or more people to less than or equal to 50 hour while, teens and age 20 people use more than 350. Likewise, these age groups have time for interact less than four people which is higher than below 20 group amount for 150 hour.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 64, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'hour' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'hours'.
Suggestion: hours
...ercise all people arrange time over 150 hour except the age of adults they have 50 t...
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Line 5, column 234, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Moreover
...ich is absent in older than 60 year old.Moreover, people who watches cinema during free...
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Line 6, column 120, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'hour' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'hours'.
Suggestion: hours
...oup instead, teens was highest with 100 hour. After the age of 30 people reduce t...
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Line 8, column 111, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'hour' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'hours'.
Suggestion: hours
...more people to less than or equal to 50 hour while, teens and age 20 people use mor...
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Line 8, column 139, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...equal to 50 hour while, teens and age 20 people use more than 350. Likewise, thes...
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Line 8, column 216, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... these age groups have time for interact less than four people which is higher th...
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Line 8, column 276, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'amount' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'amounts'.
Suggestion: amounts
...ple which is higher than below 20 group amount for 150 hour.
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Line 8, column 291, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'hour' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'hours'.
Suggestion: hours
...gher than below 20 group amount for 150 hour.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
likewise, moreover, regarding, similarly, so, while, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 846.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 179.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72625698324 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38808356306 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553072625698 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 254.7 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.6748506385 43.030603864 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.75 112.824112599 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.375 22.9334400587 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 5.23603664747 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252822687801 0.215688989381 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124174043637 0.103423049105 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0530710590209 0.0843802449381 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146325576103 0.15604864568 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0554628748671 0.0819641961636 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.45 11.4140731707 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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