You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter,
1- Give details of your study plans.
2- Explain why you want to get a part-time job.
3- Suggest how your friend could help you find a job.
Dear John,
It`s been so long since we last met. I hope you and your family are all well! I`m writing to let you know that I will move to England, where you live, for completing my post graduate studies, and I request your assistance in finding me a part time job.
I have sent numerous applications to several universities for joining their programs of Project Management. When I received the approval from Oxford on my interest last month, I was really amazed and extremely happy. The program schedule is starting in September, and I must join with the morning lectures cohort, 3 days a week.
I have managed to arrange the required funds for the program fees; however, I do still need to source the living cost. London is known as an expensive city to live in. Therefore, I am thinking to have a part-time job at the free days of the program to be able secure my living expenses.
London has various multinational companies, and I assume that you have a good network connection in it. I would therefore suggest that you share my attached resume, and that you share it with your contacts to find me a suitable part-time job at any one.
Warm regards,
Ayoub
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 249, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...request your assistance in finding me a part time job. I have sent numerous applicatio...
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Line 5, column 298, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'lectures'' or 'lecture's'?
Suggestion: lectures'; lecture's
...ember, and I must join with the morning lectures cohort, 3 days a week. I have manag...
^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 246, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'anyone'?
Suggestion: anyone
... to find me a suitable part-time job at any one. Warm regards, Ayoub
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, really, so, still, therefore, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 981.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 209.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69377990431 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61870710196 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.66985645933 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 304.2 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.463917525773 862% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.6220805709 44.8134815571 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.1818181818 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 16.8248392259 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.81818181818 4.34317383033 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264113663618 0.216113520407 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0765317281796 0.0766984524023 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101907486971 0.0603063233224 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158037926104 0.12726935374 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115300312873 0.0580467560999 199% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 8.37731958763 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 8.71597938144 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.