Space exploration cost tax payers an exorbitant amount of money each year. What are the advantages and disadvantages of spending money on space exploration?
Tax payers allocate money enormously to fund celestial exploration. Although this occurrence brings benefit such as obtaining the most recent research equipments, I believe that its drawback such as uncertainty result can be considered.
It is argued that funding space research means supporting scientists to acquire such some sophisticated research means. This is because tax provides granted endowment which enables high - cost tools of research affordable to purchase. As an illustration, in 2016, Unitary Republic of Indonesia shared 35% higher budget addressed to space exploration. As the result of this, LIPI - the national institution for space science development, bought more and more machines and cut- edge research equipments in that year. In addition, because of this budgeting, they could purchase the latest russians satellite space station which was unaffordable to purchase in the prior budgeting.
On the other hand, draining revenue on space research is like supporting virtually nothing. This comes with some reasons. Firstly, yields of this study often have nothing to do with daily life, they have less effects to societies. However, it is different when the tax budget is contributed to facilities and public services which its implications affect more to tax payers in every days. Secondly, the process of exploration and experiments takes a long period of time because the research and the experiments are often failed for many times.
In conclusion, I believe that this phenomenon has negative side such as indefinite achievements, while its positive side such as helping researchers to attain advanced research amenities can be considered.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, while, in addition, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1421.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.59448818898 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95803731234 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.622047244094 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.7616671191 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.307692308 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5384615385 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147867896964 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.053941445599 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0469824879465 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.076938069266 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.048013879192 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.14 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.74 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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