Dear Igor,
I hope the letter reaches you in the best of health. I have few things to tell and a thing to ask. Allow me to elaborate on the details.
As you must be aware, I had told you about moving into a new house once I go back to Delhi from Prague. As such, I finally moved into one and in the said regard I am throwing a small housewarming party for a few friends who I have not caught up within a really long time.
I must tell you that I have not been able to forget the Trdelnik cake that we had together at the cool bakery in Prague. I remember you telling me about the recipe and the manner to make it. However, I cannot remember the precise details and what is to be used for making it. I tried to look it up on Google. However, the method seemed very confusing to me. As such, I want you to tell me how to make it and other things to bear in mind.
I would not have bothered you for the recipe. However, it is one of the best things that I had during my trip to Prague and I would love to feed the same to my friends. I would be elated if you would share the recipe with me as I will feed my friends and also sometimes make it for my own self to feed my taste buds. I hope you will get back to me in time with the recipe for me to feed my friends.
I miss you and I hope you will come to visit me soon.
Best Wishes,
Brad Jason
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Igor, I hope the letter reaches you in the bes...
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Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...e recipe for me to feed my friends. I miss you and I hope you will come to vi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, however, if, look, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 56.0 32.9175257732 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 26.3917525773 155% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1079.0 937.175257732 115% => OK
No of words: 282.0 206.0 137% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 3.82624113475 4.54256449028 84% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 3.78020617076 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.95793818994 2.54303337028 77% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.475177304965 0.622605031667 76% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 348.3 290.88556701 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.13402061856 153% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.3444511734 44.8134815571 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.4705882353 76.5299724578 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5882352941 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.58823529412 4.34317383033 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229727227931 0.216113520407 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0723439792222 0.0766984524023 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.056563434335 0.0603063233224 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124121502734 0.12726935374 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0230402388134 0.0580467560999 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.9 8.37731958763 58% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 89.08 70.7449484536 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 4.64 8.71597938144 53% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.0 7.59969072165 79% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 5.0 8.15463917526 61% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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