young people in disturbed economies trend to become violent causing destruction to life and property. what are the causes, impacts, and remedies of such problem?
Countries economy, a significant measure of country`s quality of life, should be taken the highly consideration by governments. It is believed that youngsters who live in unstable economies are more violent and may cause detrimental actions to governmental buildings, nation properties and life standards. This essay will discuss some reasons why this has occurred and examine the consequences of this worrying trend.
Economy plays a pivotal role in any country`s life standard, and any fluctuation on it will dramatically effect on the nation, especially the youth. Government put their goals usually to secure a good quality of life to their nation, but with low economy, the spending on the essential facilities such as health, education and food will be very difficult. Thus, poverty to be measured with high levels between people. This increases the rate of robberies and other crimes among the nation to secure their minimum cost of living. For example, Southern countries of Africa suffer from high rate of crimes due to the poverty and unstable economy.
Government should consider the economy as the first priority and should concentrate on how to boost it for securing an acceptable standard of living to their nation. Firstly, concerned minister should be selected by government based on some certain qualifications which result into positive outcomes of the economy. Secondary, improving the educational system gives the appropriate knowledge to young generation by understanding that any violence leads to a deterioration on the country as well as individuals. For instance, a survey has been undertaken by a prestigious university reported that there is the rate of crimes decreases when providing a sufficient education system to nations.
To sum up, youth`s violence exists where countries have unbalanced economy, and it is shown clearly in the high rate of crimes and life deterioration. If proper expenditures on the basic facilities by government, it will limit such worrying trends among people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 111, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[7]
Message: Did you mean 'affect'?
Suggestion: affect
...any fluctuation on it will dramatically effect on the nation, especially the youth. Go...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, second, so, thus, well, for example, for instance, such as, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1729.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.48888888889 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10032142613 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577777777778 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 544.5 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.4150268217 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.5 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.92857142857 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0957101863377 0.244688304435 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0331782072249 0.084324248473 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0357262396663 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.064839776568 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0306327499155 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.86 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.04 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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