Some countries encourage teenagers to have part-time job and see it as a good thing, while other disagree. Give your opinion and explain both views.
Most of the developed regions of the world allow their citizens to start doing jobs in their teenage.
It is legal for teenagers in some countries to have a part-time job and earn their own money. Doing a job will not make a person independent but also helps to understand various emotions like handling pressure, being punctual, taking everybody along and work. It improves overall personality of a teenage. A child who is studying as well as working in his teenage will have better understanding of life, savings and handling multiple things efficiently at one time. They earn money and spend it on buying their own stuff, this will motivate them to work more, to earn more and also fill their lives with positivity.
Letting teenagers work in some areas is consider as not a good thing. The mindset behind it is that teenage is such a tender age that during this time in whatever way you mold child’s life it will be in that way for the rest of his life. Teenage is the time for a child to learn, to grow and to self-introspect what actually they want to do in their life. This is the time when they decide their goal and focus on it. If they will engage in jobs, then they will not get time to study, to excel in academics or in extracurricular activities.
In my opinion, every single individual has its own capabilities, desires and dreams. If a person wants to become a doctor then in this case he will finish his study first and then pursue for the same. On the other hand if a person wants to become an entrepreneur then he will start doing job from teenage so that he can get an idea how the business develop and expand. A person can only act according to the circumstances and situations he/she is facing at that time. Doing work and earning money at such an age may sometime be the need of an hour.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 41, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'considered'.
Suggestion: considered
...Letting teenagers work in some areas is consider as not a good thing. The mindset behind...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, if, may, so, then, well, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1487.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.45209580838 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53583623613 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526946107784 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.1866028605 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.9375 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.875 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0625 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151141566022 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0598950885508 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0747616036137 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0859242595998 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0447554003787 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 50.2224549098 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.53 12.4159519038 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.18 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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