Ever since the availability of computer technology and Internet that has increased, the number of problems caused by this has has risen subsequently. In general, Internet is primarily was designed to find necessary data or share with information in a very short time. Nevertheless, new opportunities have opened up, providing with access to various ways of spending time, which mainly was the cause of problem occurring.
First of all, he high use of web is responsible for the lack of socialization in recent years. For example, people tend to spend much more time on the internet since not only impressive amounts of information are in access there, but also various kinds of entertainment such as video games, movies or even articles. Consequently, bonds between people weakens and communication level declines. In order to solve this problem, a great idea for government would be to construct more places which may become replacement. If special recreational areas would be created, the majority would be interested in visiting it with a family member or a friend. This would lead to a quick increase in communication and, furthermore, in mutual understanding.
Another problem of current importance is a widespread of sedentary lifestyle. World wide web allows people to carry out all daily actions by using technical devices. So even things like bank transfers and shopping became easier to realize, sitting on the same place. As a result, need in doing something physically is removed by the Internet and the people suffer from consequences of the lack of movement such as obesity and other health issues. The obvious answer to overcome this is to spread special of fitness on the internet as an advertisements, in that case, people would be more aware of all issues caused by scarcity of physical activity. So, for instance, if a person sees adverts warning them about positive effects of doing sports or even making a sport brake for stretching, their awareness rises, then they will start at least thinking about solving this problem.
On the whole, the access to the internet caused crucial issues, in particular, and society, such as lack of physical activity and communication breakdown. However, by opening other entertainnant places and increasing the awareness, it is possible to overcome them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 123, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: has
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Line 5, column 535, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'an advertisement' or simply 'advertisements'?
Suggestion: an advertisement; advertisements
...d special of fitness on the internet as an advertisements, in that case, people would be more awa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, furthermore, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, then, at least, for example, for instance, in general, in particular, such as, as a result, first of all, on the whole
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 41.998997996 150% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1946.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 374.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20320855615 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3976220399 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96460768718 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 176.041082164 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606951871658 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 614.7 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.2994582879 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.470588235 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.7058823529 7.06120827912 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125308449162 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0386866928653 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0309873298782 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0705055482032 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0340363120456 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.