A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
Write a response in which you discuss your views on the policy and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider the possible consequences of implementing the policy and explain how these consequences shape your position.
Implementation of a national curriculum is a step towards implementing good unity amongst the citizens of the state. A country is ideally identified as a whole. Whenever a particular nation is under a microscope we usually ask “What is the national animal of this country” or What is the national language of the country”. The idea to know a country on a whole is basically more significant and important than those of what states the country comprises of.
Students across the nation would study a national curriculum which would implement the learning of a national language, national his...
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Sentence: A national curiculum would also increase the idea of competition amongst the students all over the country.
Error: curiculum Suggestion: curriculum
Sentence: A national curriculum would generalise equal opportunities and would also ensure that the nation on the whole is indirectly promising basic and necessary education for all the young students.
Error: generalise Suggestion: generalize
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