There is no doubt that repeats doing the same things for a long period are very boring. In order to that I think that doing a variety of tasks is more interested. Someone can consciously weigh the pros and cons of each side. The explanations are going to be as follows.
First of all, I think that the power and energy of human decrease with repeating the same tasks. They feel that they are look like the automated machine. For example, my mam is a teacher and she began teaching since 1988. My mam always feel very boring and annoyed from her work, as the subjects are the same from thirty years. The government does not provide the schools with the advanced technology to regenerate and improve the educational system. My mam said to me that she has no energy to product more.
Furthermore, the variety of tasks raises the experience and the knowledge very high. For instance, while I was graduated from Faculty of Science, I was supposed to work at my professor's laboratory in the morning. At mid- night, I was helped my mam in writing a social articles as she is a journalist. At the night, I used to work at my dad's company as an accountant. Indeed, I learned a lot about different fields and that is benefits me a lot in my life. For example, I find that is very exciting to study with my daughter the science, math and social subjects.
Finally, the more experience and the more knowledge help the human to be a social person and good talker at any conference or meeting. For example, my dad is a businessman and he works in many fields like the importing and exporting, the synthesizing of preserved food in addition, he owns a big construction company that used to build the huge projects like hospitals and schools and others. Really my dad has got a great experience and knowledge about everything. I feel so proud when I see him talk with important people or when he is invited in a large conference and festivals to say the word of the party.
In sum, due to aforementioned ground, all folk should bear in mind that a diverse is more profitable for the human as it gives him all the reasons of success and happiness.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 73, Rule ID: DT_JJ_NO_NOUN[2]
Message: Probably a noun is missing in this part of the sentence.
...ound, all folk should bear in mind that a diverse is more profitable for the human as it ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, furthermore, if, look, really, so, while, for example, for instance, i feel, i think, in addition, no doubt, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1748.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 389.0 407.700716846 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.49357326478 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44106776838 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64178813452 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.501285347044 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 549.9 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.4373199046 48.9658058833 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.2380952381 100.406767564 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5238095238 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.52380952381 5.45110844103 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116206886299 0.236089414692 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.036338299476 0.076458572812 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0509138308676 0.0737576698707 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.069819164729 0.150856017488 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0353936282222 0.0645574589148 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 11.7677419355 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 10.9000537634 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.41 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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