The following graph and pie chart shows the sales of a company in the first and the second quarter of the year.( in percentayge)
The tabular and pie charts reveal the informations about the sales of six month by a company in percentam.
It is clearly seen that, from the chart the sales of first three months by a company products. the electric product sale 15 percent in three month and clothes and food are on equal sale is 25 percent. moreover other product are sales only 20 percent in three month.
Apart from this, the second quator sales by a company products. the electric product sale only 5 percent in three month and clothes and computer items are sales only 10 percent. moving further food products sales 20 percent in second quator.
overall, it is clear that the sales of food and clothes product are in highest than other product on other side the food and clothes sale reduce over other product in second quator.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 75, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'month' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'months'.
Suggestion: months
...the informations about the sales of six month by a company in percentam. It is cl...
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Line 5, column 96, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...rst three months by a company products. the electric product sale 15 percent in thr...
^^^
Line 5, column 142, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'month' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'months'.
Suggestion: months
...ectric product sale 15 percent in three month and clothes and food are on equal sale ...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 202, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Moreover
...d food are on equal sale is 25 percent. moreover other product are sales only 20 percent...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 202, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: moreover,
...d food are on equal sale is 25 percent. moreover other product are sales only 20 percent...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 260, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'month' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'months'.
Suggestion: months
...duct are sales only 20 percent in three month. Apart from this, the second quator ...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 65, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...ond quator sales by a company products. the electric product sale only 5 percent in...
^^^
Line 7, column 115, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'month' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'months'.
Suggestion: months
...ic product sale only 5 percent in three month and clothes and computer items are sale...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 179, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Moving
...mputer items are sales only 10 percent. moving further food products sales 20 percent ...
^^^^^^
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Overall
... sales 20 percent in second quator. overall, it is clear that the sales of food and...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, moreover, second, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 33.7804878049 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 671.0 965.302439024 70% => OK
No of words: 142.0 196.424390244 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72535211268 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.45201032557 3.73543355544 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.15213157207 2.65546596893 81% => OK
Unique words: 65.0 106.607317073 61% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.457746478873 0.547539520022 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 197.1 283.868780488 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.82029841 43.030603864 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.875 112.824112599 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.75 22.9334400587 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.375 5.23603664747 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 1.69756097561 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200720280529 0.215688989381 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123896714005 0.103423049105 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.063562728116 0.0843802449381 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149672537729 0.15604864568 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0489195436359 0.0819641961636 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.2329268293 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 61.2550243902 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 11.4140731707 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.7 8.06136585366 83% => OK
difficult_words: 20.0 40.7170731707 49% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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