Each year, the crime rate increses. What are the causes of crime and what could be done to prevent this rise in criminal activity? Give reasons for your answer and include any revelent examples from your own knowledge or exerience.
"Nowadays the crime is rise day by day". Nevertheless, the given topic asserts that, why the crime is increase very fast.Trough this essay, I will examine the possible reason for this trend and suggest some of the practical policies that the authorities could to reduce this problem to the society.
The first step to understand, why the crime rates incline day by day. Broadly speaking, there are two main reasons for this problem. First of all, the money play important role in crime increasing. Because, every person need money in our life. So, the criminal masses do the crime for earning the lots of money that, is very painful for everyone as well as, the people faced many problems. The recent survey conduct in India, they are many people are criminal as compared to others countries. Apart from this, the drugs are the main reason for increasing the crime in our society. Nowadays, the drugs are rise day by day. So, every younger who are addicted and, they do crime for money. it is very harmful for people.
there is almost certainly no one solution to this problem given the complexity of its causes. However, one option has to be improve this problem from the society. Furthermore, it is the responsibility of higher authorities, they should passes some laws to reduce the crime rate in our society. Moreover, the government make some rules and regulations for this problem and the masses should be follow strictly this rules to improve this problem from the society. After that, the country makes happiest.
Nevertheless, weighing both the option. I tend to believe that there is no one conclusion still, I take in is ground that an effective clap require with both uses of hands. it is the totally responsibility of government. they, should make some rules and, the individuals follow this rules strictly than, the crime rate is decrease day by day.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, still, well, apart from, as to, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1565.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90595611285 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5842968153 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.492163009404 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 12.0 2.52805611222 475% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 54.0980884561 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.5238095238 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1904761905 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.57142857143 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 14.0 3.9879759519 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201826561952 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0615273319547 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0481212629625 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125423537022 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0476500208376 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.0946893788 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.