Some people think cars are better way of transportation around the city. While, other prefer cycling. Discuss both views and give your opinion?

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Some people think cars are better way of transportation around the city. While, other prefer cycling. Discuss both views and give your opinion?

With the rise in modernization, a man has transformed his life tremendously. Nevertheless, there are some issues which remain irrevocable and as complex as ever. For instance, the given topic asserts that which type transportation is more convenient to travel around the city; car or cycle? Through this eassy, I shall explore the dimensions of this topic through example and assertions and shape up my opinion by end.

On one side, there is a group of people who believe that nowadays population is increased day by day which is very harmful for health but with the help of cycle they can cope this problem and reduce pollution in the environment. Apart from all this, in present time people face expenses problem more than they earn and people want to save their some money for future that time they prefer cycle for travel around the city, this transportation is very cheaper which can save their transport charges.

Contrary to this, there is an opposing group of people who believe that car is very convenient vehicle which is save their time and they can easily cover long distance in few minutes. Moving further, car is better transport system to travel around the city, it is very comfortable and without any physical effects people can easily travel any where with their family.
In conclusion, I tend to believe that people should use the cars for long distance but in short distance they should give preference to cycling which is very helpful to keep their boby fit.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, nevertheless, so, apart from, for instance, in conclusion, in short

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1233.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87351778656 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53904503226 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541501976285 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 383.4 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.0296426661 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.0 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.1111111111 20.7667163134 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.44444444444 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173352556557 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0742277196647 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0548469279902 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111101048648 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0137200310764 0.056905535591 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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