Dear Sir/Madam,
I was arranged for an immigration interview recently. However, I missed it due to some circumstances which were really out of my control. I am writing letter in order to explain it detail and hopefully I may have an opportunity to be arranged for another immigration interview.
Just right on the day of the previous interview, my son’s school teacher made a phone call to me and said that my son broke his leg in school, I was shocked about it since it sounded quite seriously. Thus, I had to go to the hospital to have a look. I hope you may understand my situation at that moment. I sincerely appologise for missing the immigration interview and hope to have your forgiveness.
As said above, I hope you may offer one more opportunity of immigration interview. It is vitally important for my whole family, and I really appreciate for this opportunity. I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Derek Si Tou
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 182, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'details'?
Suggestion: details
...m writing letter in order to explain it detail and hopefully I may have an opportunity...
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Line 5, column 313, Rule ID: PRP_RB_NO_VB[1]
Message: Are you missing a verb?
...derstand my situation at that moment. I sincerely appologise for missing the immigration interview a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, look, may, really, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 795.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 165.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81818181818 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02198859357 2.54303337028 119% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.630303030303 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 259.2 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.8307968151 44.8134815571 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.2727272727 76.5299724578 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 16.8248392259 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.27272727273 4.34317383033 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295547278747 0.216113520407 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115030033098 0.0766984524023 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0909180587571 0.0603063233224 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200099033954 0.12726935374 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.059483214808 0.0580467560999 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 8.37731958763 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.08 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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