The continued rise in the world’s population is the greatest problem faced by humanity at the present time.
What are the causes of this continued rise?
Do you agree that it is the greatest problem faced by humanity?
It has been argued that the most serious challenge encountered by humanity recently is the continuous growth of the world's population. While uncontrolled birth and culture are the major contributors to the rise in the number of people on earth, this essay disagrees that the greatest challenge faced by the human being is the continued rise in world's population. Firstly, this essay will discuss the unregulated birth rate and culture as important causes for the growth and secondly, it will state the reason why the continued rise in earth's population is not a grievous challenge.
Uncontrolled birth rate and culture are the main causes of continuous increase in population globally. In some part of the world, birth rate is not regulated either by government or family. In other words, people have unprotected sex and do not use family planning methods such as contraceptives and condoms. This has increased the pregnancy rate and invariably increased the number of babies born. What is more, some cultures encourage polygamy. In this situation, one man can marry as many wives as he wanted. This result in an increase in the number of children a family can have and this leads to a growth in population. The recent survey by Queen's University has attributed the increase in population in Africa to their polygamous culture.
However, continued growth in the world's population is not the worst problem by human beings at present time. Unlike pollution which has posed a serious threat to humanity because human beings are still battling with its control, the world's population growth can be controlled. This could be achieved through education and strict government's policies on childbirth. For example, the Chinese government has recently come up with a law that you can only reproduce yourself. This means that a couple can only have two children. The policy has a great effect on the control of the population in China.
In conclusion, although the world's population is considered the worst problem faced by humanity recently, this is not true. Unlike other more dangerous problems such as pollution, continued growth in earth's population can be checked.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'worlds'' or 'world's'?
Suggestion: worlds'; world's
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Suggestion: worlds'; world's
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Suggestion: worlds'; world's
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'worlds'' or 'world's'?
Suggestion: worlds'; world's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, second, secondly, so, still, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, in other words, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1820.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 352.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17045454545 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7960954088 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.491477272727 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 562.5 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.9617042073 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.7894736842 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5263157895 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.89473684211 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.359580681179 0.244688304435 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102412933499 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106685436052 0.0667982634062 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.223644166468 0.151304729494 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.082010748298 0.056905535591 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.