The given bar graph depicts the information about number of japanese tourists travelling to abroad during one decade and line graph expounds the Australian share of japan tourists market.
A closer look at illustration reveals that, at starting year 1985 number of tourists travelling to abroad was 5 million and after that, it was constantly increased till year 1990. Moreover, number of travellers minorly decline in year 1991 and remain constant during coming two years. Along with this, it start increasing by the end of year 1995 it becomes 15 million.
Furthermore, only 2% of japanese tourists come to Australia in year 1985 and travellers start increasing upto year 1988. After that, declined in year 1989. Additionally, dramatical rise could be seen tourists travelling to abroad at peak it attributes to 6.5%. Lastly, in year 1994 proportion of tourists slightly decline.
In crux, I conclude that positive trend could be seen in japanese tourists travelling to foreign.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: reveals
...arket. A closer look at illustration reveals reveals that, at starting year 1985 number of t...
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Suggestion: attributes
...ourists travelling to abroad at peak it attribute to 6.5%. Lastly, in year 1994 proportio...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, lastly, look, moreover
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 838.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 158.0 196.424390244 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30379746835 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74184344847 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.601265822785 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 235.8 283.868780488 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.4745064728 43.030603864 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.1111111111 112.824112599 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5555555556 22.9334400587 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.44444444444 5.23603664747 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253848906675 0.215688989381 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108862274667 0.103423049105 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0792512034547 0.0843802449381 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176719995498 0.15604864568 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0603004967093 0.0819641961636 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.2329268293 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.16 11.4140731707 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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