Politicans are more respondible for protection of the environment than individual. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is incontrovertible fact that an essential problem of 21st century is pollution as well as enviromnent has became an internatinal issue and needs to be tackled soon. Nevertheless, the given topic assert that it is sole responsibilty of the government to tske step toward solving the environment problem rather than the masses. However, In this esaay, I am going to exmaine thid qiestion from both points of view.
To embark with, there are plethora of people who argue that it is government responsibilty to protect the environment. The first and foremost the goverment should make the law to protect the environment because if the authorities make the rule the people follow it.To epitomise, in delhi goverment make the odd law aganist the traffic congestion and they argue that people mostly used the public transport while the private transport. Secondly government want they warrent that the factory should be banned in the urban area because there are already lot of pollution. consequently, the pollution check center should be arranged in every area.
On the other side, the individual are equally responsibile to polluted the environment. Firstly, the major cause of the deterioraing condition of the environment is pollution caused the use of vehciles whereas, they used the public transport because it is the best way to save the envorinment. A good example of this if each person takes it upon himself or herself to use public transport more, to walk to short distances rather than using a vehicle or to use the eco friendly modes of transport, like bicycles, then this problem dhoul be decreased. last but not least the people follows the law which make by the government.
In conculsion, there are variety of different factors that have lead to make thid problem worse. While it may not be possible to find a complete solution of this problem. The government and masses are equally responsible for this problem, if the government can definitely making the laws against the pollution and the people follow it then this problem can be easily solved.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 111, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'become'.
Suggestion: become
...is pollution as well as enviromnent has became an internatinal issue and needs to be t...
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Line 3, column 266, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: To
...ties make the rule the people follow it.To epitomise, in delhi goverment make the ...
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Line 3, column 570, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Consequently
...use there are already lot of pollution. consequently, the pollution check center should be a...
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Line 5, column 551, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Last
..., then this problem dhoul be decreased. last but not least the people follows the la...
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Line 7, column 98, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...t have lead to make thid problem worse. While it may not be possible to find a comple...
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Line 7, column 273, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'make'
Suggestion: make
...oblem, if the government can definitely making the laws against the pollution and the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, firstly, however, if, may, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, then, well, whereas, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 8.3376753507 276% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1731.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 342.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06140350877 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83604780079 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538011695906 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 542.7 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.732561554 49.4020404114 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.642857143 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4285714286 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.07142857143 7.06120827912 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0579744860461 0.244688304435 24% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0181629119423 0.084324248473 22% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0232540619648 0.0667982634062 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0352124768011 0.151304729494 23% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0106942282049 0.056905535591 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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