Some people think it is goid thing for senior management poaitions to have very high salaries compared to other workers of the same company or organisation. To what extent you agree?
With the steady growth in modernization the lifestyle of people have been greatly affected, every people want money in their life because with the help of money they fulfill their every need. However, sone issues remain unchallenged and as complex as evr. One such issue here is of that it is better for senior manager to have fat pay compared to anthor employes of the same companies or not? I vehemently agree this statement because they deserve it. I am going to explicate my view ponits in upcoming paragraphs.
On one side, there is a group of people who believe that the senior management take the high salaries.The first and foremost, they have multi talented person and a talented manager run the company very frequently. The stregthen their view point by claiming that the company gain the sucess and prosperity with the dedication and hard work of manager. A epitomise of this, in the office a manager has lot of responsibiltes, if the manager do not do any work properly the company does not run.
To continue my view points, the manager has lot of experience as well as they know how to deal in the critically situation. To make their argunents convincing they claim that the manager face the lot of problems and stress in their work which may causes health problem would be the good illustarte of this, that is the manager do work every time day and night as compared to the another works while, the they have work in any situtation.Therefore, people should accept the truth that big responsibilities deserve big salaries.
Nevertheless, weighing both the opinion. I believe that there is no single conclusion. I think the senior manager deserve the high salaries because the do lot of work with the responibilty, punctuality, leadership as compared to the other employes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, then, therefore, well, while, i think, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1490.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88524590164 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8628527427 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.537704918033 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 94.0156728719 49.4020404114 190% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.615384615 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4615384615 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.07692307692 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218617091644 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0716507709274 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0804223377654 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140691381153 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0416734178275 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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