Some people think that art is essential subject for children at school while other think it is waste of time. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
It is incontrovertible fact that the art have little or no place in the educational curriculum so far because we have feeling that time spent on this thing is time waste. A majority of people accord that art is nessary subject for offspring at school whereas other assert that it is waste of time. I shall explore the dimensions of this topic through examples and assertion and shape up my opinion by the end.
To embark with, there is a group of people who believe that art is important topic for pupils at school. The first and foremost is the art make the children more creative because in this extra-curricular activities they used their own idea as well as imagination. Furthermore, these subjects are stress busters also, in the highly competitive era of today, pressure of academic subjects is too high. If the childern choose this subject at school they do better in other subjects. To epitomize, a student who attend the mathematics period, after that they do any activity like music and painting they relax their mind and increased their concentration so, they do better when they attend the class again of monotony subjects. Last but not least, In this way their hidden talent show and they choose it as a career and they earn the name and fame with the help of these activities.
On the other side few populaces assert that these activities wastage of time. To make their arguments convincing they claim that their parents think that it is the extra burden of students which distract the offspring in their major subjects. Moreover, they say it effects the children performance at school because if their children act the curriculum activities and it destroys the children career while they do no choose these activities in their future. A good illustration is if the student is weak in some subject their parent do not permission the student to act and select these subject at the school.
Nevertheless, weighing both the opinion, I believe that there is no single conclusion. The art plays very important role in children's life because it has lot of advantages. On the counter part it has some demrits. Noticeably, I think it depends on the children and parents thinking if the children is good in this activities so, the parents incurje their children.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, well, whereas, while, i think, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 57.0 24.0651302605 237% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1888.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 389.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85347043702 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44106776838 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69473490521 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.491002570694 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 579.6 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.6647164683 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.058823529 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8823529412 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.11764705882 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270505749518 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0971252070487 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0778496939406 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178385858896 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0457136435156 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.