Some people believe that positive feedback at work is important to perform effectively while others argue that positive feedback is a spoiler and people became too confident and their performance degards. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is incontrovertible fact that the feedback can be used to give information or praise, but it is also extremely useful as a tool to help people to improve. Few masses accord that to perform affectingly at work the positive feedback ply essential role; majority of folks assert that it impact the person performs. I am going to explicate my view points in up coming paragraph.
To embark with, there are plethora of reasons why the positive feedback is important for the better work. The first and foremost, the positive feedback increase the conifedence in the populace so, people do work very hardly as well as they gain the success in their work. The stregthen their view point by claiming that in this way people motivate toward their work and they concentration their work. To Epitomise the mukesh ambani is the successful businessman. They arranged the meeting after three month and they motivate their empolyees, in this way their workers perform better as well as do work with the dedication.
On the other side, a fair no of masses assert that it spoiler the confidence of the person. To make their arguments convincing thst claim that if the take more positive feedback the people became over confidence furthermore, they have no competition spirit because they know they have support their seniors. Also, they face the lot of loss in their work would be the perfect example of this richest person in the india vijay mallya was the owner of kingfisher airline. He is very successful person but after few years he has over confidence in his work and he started the misbehave towards his workers after that he face the lose in his business.
Nevertheless weighing both the opinion.I believe that there is no one single conculsion because each coin has two aspects. If the positive feedback has demrits as well as merits. I think its depend on the person how the use the positive feedback in their work.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, nevertheless, so, then, well, i think, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 24.0651302605 187% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1592.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83890577508 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5953887415 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522796352584 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.1036681752 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.133333333 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9333333333 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.340057929204 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114885893242 0.084324248473 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0676821448937 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207656605822 0.151304729494 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0390606046745 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.