According to the mentality of some folks ,it is firmly committed that the expenditure of money on the arts is inappropriate .Therefore,government should rather emphasize the utilization of this money in some other significant sectors than arts.I fully agree with this point of view .Further, the agree points of this given statement have to be discussed in upcoming paragraphs.
To begin with,the grievously issues such as infrastructures improvement and transportation system as well as development of a city are essential to rise the living standards as compared to investing in arts. For example, if the money is spent by government to widen the roads then car accidents will definitely reduce.Usually, it can be clearly consider in this globalization era ,how the ample of people are having to suffer from health problems.Hence , the big chunk of money should be spent for fabricating a new hospitals.
Furthermore, government should spend more on education than it arts because the future of our country truly depends on how well our educational system prepare students to deal with the world. This is the only way they will be able to compete in the new global market.
To conclude,government is supposed to spend money in useful sections for people because the country evolution is totally relies upon the development of these sectors.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, if, so, then, therefore, well, for example, such as, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 10.4138276553 10% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1137.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 216.0 315.596192385 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26388888889 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.34729109962 2.80592935109 119% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.615740740741 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 355.5 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 20.2975951904 177% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 99.9695787061 49.4020404114 202% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 189.5 106.682146367 178% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.0 20.7667163134 173% => OK
Discourse Markers: 16.3333333333 7.06120827912 231% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 5.01903807615 458% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.339560790421 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140001883497 0.084324248473 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107032477449 0.0667982634062 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18595413147 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0956828195783 0.056905535591 168% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.3 13.0946893788 163% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.94 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 11.3001002004 153% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.82 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.1190380762 162% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.7795591182 186% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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