The graph shows Underground Station passenger numbers in London.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The graph shows Underground Station passenger numbers in London.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The given line graph provides an overview of the travelers who use the underground station on a daily basis in London.

In the morning from 6 am to 8 am, there is a rapid escalation in the number of passengers, accounting for 400 number of travelers, while between 8 am and 10 am, the ratio of passengers decline swiftly to over 200; subsequently, from 10 am to 2 pm, the travelers exhibit a gradual increase until 12 am, whereas they are almost stable between 12 am and 2 pm.

After 2 pm, the passengers start declining dramatically and reach 100 number at 4 pm, but 4 pm to 6 pm, the commuters follow a rising trend and hit the highest point of near about 400. After 6 pm, the number of passengers decreases swiftly. Eventually, from 8 pm to 10 pm, the travelers show minor fluctuations.

Overall, the underground station of London remains busy, thereby using in the morning and evening time of the day.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 358, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e almost stable between 12 am and 2 pm. After 2 pm, the passengers start declini...
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Line 5, column 273, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...swiftly. Eventually, from 8 pm to 10 pm, the travelers show minor fluctuations. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, whereas, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 750.0 965.302439024 78% => OK
No of words: 165.0 196.424390244 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.54545454545 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84032357603 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575757575758 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 212.4 283.868780488 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 100.976344865 43.030603864 235% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 125.0 112.824112599 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5 22.9334400587 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.83333333333 5.23603664747 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128276646594 0.215688989381 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0838655791252 0.103423049105 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0452128486328 0.0843802449381 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0948752776803 0.15604864568 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0429839452052 0.0819641961636 52% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.45 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.41 11.4140731707 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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