In the modern world, a university education is essential in order to get a
rewarding job and earn a high salary.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
We live in a knowledge-based society. Recent years have witnessed an upsurge in the number of university enrolment and many, in fact, believe that a university degree is a stepping stone to a decent, highly paid career. Yet, the opposite is equally true.
For some jobs, a university degree is essential. People aspire to succeed in life, and society has made some professions more prestigious than the others, notably doctors and lawyers. In order to pursue these careers, one must undergo a university education. Moreover, today's competition in the job market means that a higher degree is essential to stand out among the candidates of white-collar jobs. Achieving higher level degrees, such as a PhD, can also lead to job promotion and, eventually, an increase in salary. Hence, getting a tertiary degree could secure a decent job in this meritocratic society.
However, a university education is not always required to achieve a self-fulfilled life. Many, in fact, live on satisfactorily with a decent wage without having attended a university. To illustrate, manual works such as plumbers and electricians are actually more rewarding than the office jobs. Besides, those who are badly affected by rising unemployment are often graduates. Learning a vocation is as good as going through the higher education. Not only do high salary careers mostly depend on job scarcity, the definition of a rewarding career itself is highly subjective. High-status professions do not always guarantee self-fulfilment. Thus, it is unreasonable to equate well-paid jobs to university education.
Undeniably, the university is the last furlong of most people's life. Profession, conversely, encompasses passion, social needs and one's background. Thus, a university education is not necessarily a prerequisite for a decent job; a right attitude and a handful of experiences are more essential.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 132, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
..., encompasses passion, social needs and ones background. Thus, a university educatio...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, besides, conversely, hence, however, if, moreover, so, thus, well, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1595.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44368600683 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21604224143 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610921501706 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 524.7 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.8055551474 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.75 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.65 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.95 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184195897586 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0473944371896 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0418873398759 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103299617052 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.025746999893 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 40.34 50.2224549098 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.68 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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