In the modern world, a university education is essential in order to get a rewarding job and earn a high salary. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Since the dawn of human civilization, people have recognized the value of education, and universities are considered as the highest institutions, to gain knowledge from. At present, to have a good job with handsome pay, it is very important to have a suitable university degree. In my opinion, I mostly agree with this fact.
To begin with, there is no doubt that university education enables us to seek a better employment opportunity, with greater financial benefits, as it prepares us to tackle real life situations, that are very helpful in our professional lives. For example, no one can imagine becoming a doctor, unless he/she goes through a rigorous university training for a longer duration. But once the competency of being a doctor is attained, a person can lead a respectable and prosperous life. In contrast, there are certain professions, like artists, singers, or athletes, where talent and self-motivation are more important than having a university degree, and yet there are good financial benefits available.
Furthermore, universities are also offering numerous knowledge upgrade programs for working professionals of all levels. These programs help the professionals to update with recent, as well as upcoming trends, and in turn, to progress in their career. For instance, Harvard University periodically organizes an Artificial Intelligence course for practicing surgeons across the globe, which enables already successful surgeons, to meet the needs of constantly evolving surgical techniques. However, these frequent upgrades are increasing competition among working individuals.
To conclude, with exceptions of a few professions, where personal abilities and talent are more important, university education is a key to achieve professional excellence in terms of job and salaries.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, so, well, for example, for instance, in contrast, no doubt, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1546.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.68382352941 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23993650884 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.643382352941 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 13.0 4.76152304609 273% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.3466836058 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.833333333 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6666666667 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4166666667 7.06120827912 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0891647691591 0.244688304435 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0319375459821 0.084324248473 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0251878711508 0.0667982634062 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0598497641038 0.151304729494 40% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.022959664237 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.96 12.4159519038 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.84 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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