The bar chart below shows the average monthly maximum temperatures for three Australian cities in the year 2016. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar diagram gives information about the average monthly peak temperature in three Australian cities (namely Melbourne, Darwin, and Perth) in the year 2016. The units are measured in degree Celsius.
Overall, Darwin was the hottest of them all, throughout the year, with a minimal variation of fewer than three degrees between different months of the year, whereas Melbourne was found to be relatively cooler than other two cities at any given month in the year. It also experienced the greatest variation in peak temperature throughout the year.
Discussing the further details, the hottest months for Darwin was November, when the temperature reached 33.3 degrees. On the other hand, July was found to be coldest with a maximum average temperature of 30.5 degree Celsius. The other months of the year ranged between 30.5 – 33.3 degrees with no characteristic trend to follow.
Furthermore, Melbourne and Perth, followed similar trends of rise and fall in the mercury, across the year. Like Darwin, January was the hottest months for both these cities with a peak of 25.8 and 28.1 degrees respectively, and July was the coldest with a maximum of 13.3 and 18.8 degrees respectively.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, so, whereas, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1004.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 193.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20207253886 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6698874033 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533678756477 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 288.0 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.8063483095 43.030603864 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.555555556 112.824112599 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4444444444 22.9334400587 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.88888888889 5.23603664747 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213740394316 0.215688989381 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0968895619812 0.103423049105 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0858290194486 0.0843802449381 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155741544777 0.15604864568 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0744589007512 0.0819641961636 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 11.4140731707 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.