Nowadays many people travel to foreign countries for pleasure. Some believe this travel has a negative impact on the countries traveled to.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Since the dawn of human civilization, travelling has been a very rewarding activity, both in terms of business and education. It enables us to learn about new culture and social practices. While some people believe that travel has a negative impact on the countries travelled to, I do believe that in spite of a few concerning issues, travel is mostly beneficial for these travel destinations. In this essay, I would like to discuss about the advantages and disadvantages of travelling upon the visited countries.
To begin with, I would like to discuss about the tourism industry, that is one of the major backbones of economy for many countries like Mauritius, Maldieves, Thailand and Carrebian Islands. The tourists not only provide source of income for hotels, travel agencies, transportation facilities, but also help the local government to generate revenue form the tourist attractions in form of visiting tickets, souveniers, special events and charity. Besides that it also provides business to the local shops and resturants. I would also like to mention about medical tourism, which is providing relatively cheaper and faster medical care to patients and also helping the medical infrastructure to generate revenue and grow in the host country.
However, there are a few drawbacks of travelling on the host countries too. These include pollution, destruction of nature, propagation of illegal acts and practices like prostitution and drug trafficking etcetra. I would like to give an example from my home country. In India, we have a very beautiful coastal destination, Goa, which always attracted tourists because of it's natural beauty. However since Goa became popular among globetrotters, it has become the hub for drug cartels and traffickers in India. It has destroyed the future of many Goan youngsters and ended them up in jails.
To conclude, I would like to clarify my position regarding the negative impact of travel on the destination countries by saying that I disagree with this opinion. Although as a tourist, we must realize our responsibility towards these exotic locations in terms of not polluting or damaging them and we shall preserve them for generations to come. I believe that travel has more to give these locations than what it takes from there.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 393, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...tourists because of its natural beauty. However since Goa became popular among globetro...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, regarding, so, while, in spite of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 65.0 41.998997996 155% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1924.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 367.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24250681199 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37689890912 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93008666519 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569482288828 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 612.9 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 5.43587174349 258% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.4792276728 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.176470588 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5882352941 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.76470588235 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.3149370733 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0935538764733 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.130435989518 0.0667982634062 195% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199529824697 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.134477568544 0.056905535591 236% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 78.4519038076 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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