Nowadays many young people are Often spending their free time in shopping centre . This has a negative effect on youth and society . To what extent do you agree or disagree.
In modern-era , a majority of youngsters mostly spend their leisure time in shopping mall.Certain individuals assert that this has negative effect on young generation and society. As far as my point of view , this trend has both negative and positive impact on young generation and society which I would discuss further.
I suppose that there are quite a clear benefits of young people are spending their free time in shopping mall but the most part the one thing that really stands out is that nowadays young people are shopaholic. They often spend their leisure time in shopping mall. This is obviously favourable because when youngsters visit any
shopping centre .They about different brands.They know which brands are popular in these days so they only wear popular cloths. At the same time second bonus could be that thesedays young people spend their free time
In shopping mall . This is clearly advantageous
for society because young people only spend time shopping mall. They never do any activities which are not good for society like young people never take any drugs and alcohol. They only like to spend their free time in shopping mall.
I think it's fear to say that there are a few negative aspects of this trend. I suppose the most unfavourable quality might be that thesedays youngsters only spend their free time in shopping centre . They never do any outdoor activities and youngster never do any physical work so they encounter many health problems like obesity . Correspondingly,an additional weak point might be that young people often visit in shopping mall. They often buy those thing which are not really need it. Therefore this is totally wastage of time and money.
In conclusion, I would like to pen down this trend
has both negative and positive effect on youth and society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
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Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1513.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02657807309 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50001708739 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.468438538206 0.561755894193 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
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Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
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Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.3186040775 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.5625 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8125 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5625 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.38176352705 183% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 21.0 5.01903807615 418% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
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Sentence topic coherence: 0.158084731861 0.084324248473 187% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0799727134643 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193597538832 0.151304729494 128% => OK
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Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.89 8.58950901804 80% => OK
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text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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