Dear Susan,
I wish you could know how expected I have for visit England in August. Unfortunately, the plan had to change because of an important event of my family. Do you remember Mai who you met at my house on last vacation in Vietnam? She is going to marred at 15th and I have just known that 2 hours recently. she takes me by surprise but I am totally worry about a visit. I really love her and can't be absent in her wedding. I believe that you can understand the importance of this event. So I am extremely apologized about an embarrassing situation.
Although I can come to England as expected, how do you think if I visit at 20th August immediately after my sister's wedding. Please let me know as soon as possible because I have to book the ticket early.
Yours best friend,
Vy
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 231, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'She' must be used with a third-person verb: 'goes'.
Suggestion: goes
... house on last vacation in Vietnam? She gonna be marred at 15th and I just knew that ...
^^^^^
Line 2, column 266, Rule ID: KNEW_NEW[1]
Message: Did you mean 'new'?
Suggestion: new
... She gonna be marred at 15th and I just knew that 2 hours recently. she take me by s...
^^^^
Line 2, column 294, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: She
... and I just knew that 2 hours recently. she take me by surprise but I am totally wo...
^^^
Line 2, column 298, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'takes'.
Suggestion: takes
... I just knew that 2 hours recently. she take me by surprise but I am totally worry a...
^^^^
Line 2, column 335, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'worried'.
Suggestion: worried
...he take me by surprise but I am totally worry about the a visit. I really love her an...
^^^^^
Line 2, column 347, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'a' is left.
Suggestion: the; a
...y surprise but I am totally worry about the a visit. I really love her and cant be ab...
^^^^^
Line 2, column 382, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...bout the a visit. I really love her and cant be absent in her wedding. I believe tha...
^^^^
Line 4, column 19, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ok the ticket early. Yours best friend, Vy
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 638.0 937.175257732 68% => OK
No of words: 147.0 206.0 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.34013605442 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.48200454523 3.78020617076 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61080955464 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 127.690721649 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.687074829932 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 206.1 290.88556701 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.3450580538 44.8134815571 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 58.0 76.5299724578 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.3636363636 16.8248392259 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.72727272727 4.34317383033 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.29896907216 47% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261478440503 0.216113520407 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0908307028996 0.0766984524023 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0634322903537 0.0603063233224 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162231934272 0.12726935374 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0699195943396 0.0580467560999 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.7 8.37731958763 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.3 8.71597938144 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.07 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 41.2886597938 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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